A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Manager,
I am writing to inform you that I have seen advertisement local gujarat samachar news paper in which it mentioned that there are many position for waiters and waitresses for your Sasuma restaurant. nowadays I have been currently doing my job as waiter for five years at Laxmi restaurant near by lalgate.
As you looking for waiters with management skill and have nature to please customer with their service, I am looking myself as better candidate for this vacancie. I had done hotel management course before joining this restaurant. Manager happy the way I am serving our customer. The Taste of food have been provided before so they can choose particular item which they prefer. Many customer provide me tips too.
On next Wednesday I will have leave full day so I can attend an interview to show my skill in this particular space and I hope that you will be delighted with my skill.
Your Faithfully
Jitendra Ramoliya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you that I have s...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...en advertisement local gujarat samachar news paper in which it mentioned that there are ma...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun position seems to be countable; consider using: 'many positions'.
Suggestion: many positions
...er in which it mentioned that there are many position for waiters and waitresses for your Sas...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
... waitresses for your Sasuma restaurant. nowadays I have been currently doing my job as w...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...iter for five years at Laxmi restaurant near by lalgate. As you looking for waiters...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun customer seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many customers'.
Suggestion: Many customers
...oose particular item which they prefer. Many customer provide me tips too. On next Wednesd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90683229814 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57826079475 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6491466604 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245888058845 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891800722748 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943070301178 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157954747346 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134573801292 0.0580467560999 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.