A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is in response to your advertisement about your need for a waiter to work in your lucrative restaurant.
I passed out Bachelors in Culinary arts in the year 2008. Since then, I am a kitchen assistant cum floor waiter in the Hilton hotel located near Heathrow airport. My last job roles include: cleaning cutlery, waiting at the table to welcome guests, serving breakfast or main courses of the day to the guests, settling bills, dressing the tables once they leave and finally, taking telephone and online orders.
I can guarantee that I will easily fit into your organisation as I already have hands on experience in this area. To elaborate my strengths: positive attitude with customers which aids in conflict resolution, fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Spanish), able to deal with arduous tasks i.e. willing to put in good efforts to complete all responsibilities by the end of the day and finally, I am scrupulous; meaning, I accept my accountability to fulfill my employment contract with honesty.
I am available immediately for an interview.
Sincerely,
Jack Dan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96433889033 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717391304348 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.851395649 44.8134815571 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.5 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185938991083 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820384108331 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118432407931 0.0603063233224 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15483099777 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151394009559 0.0580467560999 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.