Write an email for your teacher to talk about your weekend
Hello Martin. I'm Phuong.
In the last lesson, you gave us the homework about our weekend or interesting events, something news. That's the reason why you are reading this email. In the first place, I just didn't know what to tell you, because I'm an introvert. I don't have many friends. I prefer staying at home to going out. Every day, I just go to the workplace, do my best then come back home. If my friends and I don't have any plan to hang out with each other, I will go to the gym or be at home and order some foods to eat. It's my day-to-day life.
This evening, I went to a BBQ restaurant in Phan Xich Long street with my best friend. Because I had some works not finished yet, when we started to go, it was 7:45 pm already. Before I came to pick her up, I had talked with her that I want to eat something hot like BBQ or Hotpot. You know, Saigon has rained a lot lately. Eating BBQ or Hotpot must be great. Phan Xich Long is one of the most famous roads with a lot of delicious foods. We went along that road to find a place to eat.
Unfortunately, the familiar restaurants we called had no available tables. So we decided to go to a new restaurant, also on Phan Xich Long street. Before going to the restaurant, we also called first and received a sure answer that they still had empty tables. But when we arrived, all the tables were full, and staff informed us to wait 15 minutes. My friend exclaimed "This is actually "Cú lừa", which makes me laugh so hard. "Cú lừa" is the word often used by young people nowadays, it signifies a lie. Besides, the name of the restaurant is "Ăn để phúc", which can mean eating to bring happiness and joy. I told my friend that the name is "Ăn để phúc", but we had to wait, so we are not happy at all. But we had no other choice, coz it's a rush hour on the weekend, so we decided to wait until we can have a table for the two of us. Unexpectedly, their food quite delicious and the staffs were also very nice. Hanging out with my friend, talking about jobs and life is a great way to reduce the stress and charge my old battery. The grilled food was delicious and we also ate Hokkaido ice cream. It is icing on the cake!
I am very grateful that you gave us the opportunity to practice English like this, outside of class. See you next week
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hello Martin Im Phuong In the last lesson you gave us...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Martin Im Phuong In the last lesson you gave us the homew...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...mework about our weekend or interesting events something news Thats the reason why you...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nd or interesting events something news Thats the reason why you are reading this ema...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ng this email In the first place I just didnt know what to tell you because Im an int...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ust didnt know what to tell you because Im an introvert I dont have many friends I...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t to tell you because Im an introvert I dont have many friends I prefer staying at h...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...then come back home If my friends and I dont have any plan to hang out with each oth...
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Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... be at home and order some foods to eat Its my daytoday life This evening I went t...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t along that road to find a place to eat Unfortunately the familiar restaurants w...
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Line 4, column 741, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y at all But we had no other choice coz its a rush hour on the weekend so we decide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, then, talking about, you know, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 32.9175257732 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 937.175257732 192% => OK
No of words: 447.0 206.0 217% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02684563758 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11205351149 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 127.690721649 179% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512304250559 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 290.88556701 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 447.0 16.3608247423 2732% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1800.0 76.5299724578 2352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 447.0 16.8248392259 2657% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 101.0 4.34317383033 2325% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0501421034409 0.216113520407 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501421034409 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0215026114559 0.12726935374 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228392782587 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 221.1 8.37731958763 2639% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -356.85 70.7449484536 -504% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 174.1 7.45979381443 2334% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.57 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.82 7.59969072165 366% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 180.8 8.54432989691 2116% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 8.15463917526 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.