Write a letter to the Tour Company manager to appreciate your tour guide
1. Give your tour details 2. What do you like about the tour guide 3. Suggest ways for the manager to appreciate the guide
Dear Mr. Sam,
I am writing to express my thanks for making our visit to the Hallelujah Mountain on 23 August 2019 a wonderful experience and moreover, for providing us with an amazing guide - Mr. Sujan - on our tour.
As you know, we were in a group of 12 visitors which mainly consisted of foreigners coming from as many as 8 different countries. As expected, not all of us were equally proficient in English language which I had supposed would make life difficult for Sujan. However, it was a complete surprise for all of us as we could find him responding in six different languages depending upon which nationality he was addressing to. Although, I have met multilingual guides on my previous tours to other places, this was a completely different experience. We all felt the need to show our appreciation and buying him a Canon M565 Camera was just a small gesture for his extremely heroic efforts.
In my opinion, it must be a matter of great privilege for any tour agency to have a tour guide as talented as Sujan. Therefore, I would much appreciate if you could offer him an increment in his salaries as he deserves more than he is <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">currently </span>entitled.
Please let me know how you feel about my suggestion.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Sunjan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age which I had supposed would make life difficult for Sujan. However, it was a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, therefore, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89035087719 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31454091459 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1320136755 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191997389397 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671019002021 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695110744668 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993950313601 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542036264207 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.