Hi Sara,
Hope this letter finds you in good health and in high spirits. I am writing to you to let you know that I have won a photography competition. It feels really excited to have participated and won among 400 entries across the globe. As you may know, I was one of the final participant in the international painting competition happened in Paris last week.
The event occurred in an affluent way with participants from all parts of the world. Since it is an international competition, different kinds of cuisines were served to the participants. There were other fascinating programmes such as dancing, singing and magic shows to engage the participants. The event was organized for two days in a 5-star hotel and there were five judges to examine the painting. At the end of the second day, I was announced as a winner. I was awe-struck to hear my name and tears rolled out on hearing my name in the winning list.
I would like to explain about my entry which was the precursor to my success. I took the theme of “Child Abuse” and painted a child photo in oil. I covered different phases a child which she has been abused. The painting came out very well and certainly, it avenues my victory. I will share the photo with you, however, it would be great if you could visit “Sir. Lucis Museum” at Chicago where this painting has been kept for visitor’s display. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours’ faithfully,
Chitra
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an affluent way" with adverb for "affluent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...Paris last week. The event occurred in an affluent way with participants from all parts of the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which was the precursor to my success. I took the theme of 'Child Abuse&apo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos; and painted a child photo in oil. I covered different phases a child which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, second, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76078431373 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86785469334 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0273121342 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4444444444 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159940362028 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500340166917 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701641272644 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111206079578 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071682111173 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.