Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed– Explain what happened– What you will do about it

Dear Laura,

I hope you and your family doing well, I am writing this letter to inform you that accidentally I broked your Sony Camera that is I borrowed from you last week, at last, I put my pen to explain how it has happened.

As you know, my brother's engagement was held on 22nd December 2019. The purpose of to take high definition photos I was taken your high expensive Camera. But, It is broken. Actually, what happens when I was taking photos to form the corner side of the floor, suddenly I slipped from the floor and Camera hit the ground hard. I tried to fix it but lenses were broken. I Am so sorry for this I did not expect like this am feeling so guilty.

I have taken the camera into the servicing center. I ordered new lenses for it, within two days I will receive it. After receiving the Lenses I will check and I will send it to you.

I hope you will understand my situation and forgive me.

Best Regards
Bhanu

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...rry for this I did not expect like this am feeling so guilty. I have taken the ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pect like this am feeling so guilty. I have taken the camera into the servicin...
^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the camera into the servicing center. I ordered new lenses for it, within two d...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36516853933 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24219247446 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6011263139 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.75 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277619685728 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708545024264 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905961395624 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162585711214 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097906945382 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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