Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution What are the problems Why should solve the problems How to solve the problems

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution.
.What are the problems.
. Why should solve the problems.
. How to solve the problems.

Dear Sir,

I am Bharat Prajapati, working as a full-time employee in IT department of Matrix Solutions as a Network Engineer. I am writing this letter to grievance regarding vehicle parking issue since long time.

Our office building has no any parking space. Therefor, all staff suffer where to park own vehicle. Our firm located at the centre of town and it is congested too. Moreover, locality is too posh as I can not afford higher rent to stay near to office. Thus, i rented a flat outside the city at where rent is cheaper than this place. Apart from this public transportation stoppage is also far away from our location so, we have to board an auto and sometimes have to walk due to long queue in hiring an auto and reach office with low energy.

Our organization has more than fifty number of staff who suffer daily due to unavailable of parking space. Few colleagues stopped drive to office in their personal vehicle due to space issue and getting late intermittently to reach at office.

Near to our building at walking distance there is one open space of private owner. I know him very well and he has no any plan to build anything in near future so we can rent that space for parking.

I hope to solve this issue very soon.

Yours Sincerely,
Bharat Prajapati.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gher rent to stay near to office. Thus, i rented a flat outside the city at where...
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Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... owner. I know him very well and he has no any plan to build anything in near futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65502183406 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47697199179 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8141855275 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0510568662243 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227766470326 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277778427002 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355904921483 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031304131469 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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