Writing task 1 a letter Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say Inform him her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered What issues did you face with the delivery service Suggest what

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about consignment that is not delivered yet.

On 20 th April, I had purchased 4 air conditioners of brand Daikin from your establishment. The invoice number is 'ER67YHU' that amounts to 152000 Rs including delivery charges. These were supposed to be delivered on or before 25 April. However, I received a text message today that delivery will be delayed now. When I tracked the conignment from shipping partner I came to know that there is technical fault in vehicle due to which shipment would fail to reach on time.

These units are purchased for my new saloon and I had planned to get it live on 5th May. Moreover, invitations are already sent and there is no chance to postpone it. Hence, I am requesting you to align your technical team to provide early installation. Because during purchase it was informed that installation can take 5-6 businees days, once delivered and pre installation is the only way to overcome the logistics delay. Other than this, I can also install it locally if the charges could be reimbursed.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take a prompt action for this inconvenience.

Thanking You,
Roman Cook.

Votes
Average: 8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oday that delivery will be delayed now. When I tracked the conignment from shipping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85377358491 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79549092127 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693396226415 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3116034399 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180436817774 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574631868781 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417006876362 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958508259757 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146268208047 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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