Writing task 1 (a letter)
You live in a rental accommodation. Due to a recent bad weather event there was a small amount of damage to your apartment. Write a letter to your landlord and say
– What was damaged and why?
– How is this damage causing you a problem?
– What would you like your landlord to do about it?
Dear Peter,
Hope this letter finds you well as all faced hurricane last week. I am Divya, your tenant living in your apartment number 12 in New South Street. Last week’s weather due to hurricane wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Houston. I am writing this letter to inform you that the damage to my house was much more severe and it needs to be urgently fixed.
Strong winds from the North done a heavily damage to city's infrastructure in general and to this house in particular. The storm somehow affected the outer walls and destroyed a portion of the house’s heating system. Consequently, the drawing room’s and bathroom’s heating systems are not working. Moreover, a few wide cracks have appeared in the house’s roof.
Since the city is cold outside, and cracks in the structure are dangerous, I believe you need to urgently fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contractor, and get the repair estimate prepared quickly. I am sure the property is insured against damage caused by weather. The insurance company will release the funds immediately.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...apos;s weather due to hurricane wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Hou...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('heavily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('damage') instead of another adjective.
...ed. Strong winds from the North done a heavily damage to citys infrastructure in general and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'systems'' or 'system's'?
Suggestion: systems'; system's
...y fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contracto...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, moreover, so, well, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18781725888 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85687155226 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6714818018 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255023703546 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767511816982 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746578903099 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129391578351 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105954754981 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.