You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while youa re studying,so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some helpWrite a letter to this friend. In your letterGive details of your study plansExplain why you wa

Essay topics:

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while youa re studying,so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Sandra,

How are you doing? Hope you are doing well. I am planning to come to Australia in mid of December for my studies and hope to visit you once I visit there.

I have got a scholarship under Australian Award scholarship scheme to do a Master of Business Studies in Monash University Melbourne. The academic year starts in Januar 2020 and follows for three years of full-time course. According to the course outline, I have lectures from 8.00 a.m to 4.00 p.m and I would like to do a part-time job during my stay in Australia.

Since, I am getting a half scholarship I need to find funds for my food and accomodation together with other expenses like travelling and medical requirements. However, I have got full exemption on tution fees for all the three years of my study. Therefore, I would like to know about the ways in which I can apply for a part-time job in Australia and also some advice on preparing my CV according to the formats, which are been used in Australia at present context. Apart from that, I want to get some information on the interview questions and the ways in which they conduct interviews, because I have never got an exposure of working in a multi national company. If it is possible, can you please submit my CV to appropriate job vacancies advertised in newspapers and websites, in order for me to find a job at my earliest.

I look forward for your reply soon and convey my regards to your family members as well.

Best Regards,

Charani

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61048689139 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71678381668 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.825582441 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219257110644 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084529157616 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618143534028 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140595011973 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556248247693 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.