You are looking for a part time job Write a letter to an employment agency In your letter introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresse

Essay topics:

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency.
In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills
you have
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir/Madam,
Myself Srini, and I am writing this letter to express my interest in working part-time with your employment agency, Premium Employment Services.
I am twenty-six years old reside at 45 Brooklyn Street; I share my flat with my friends. As of now, I am pursuing a two year Masters degree associated with Santa Clara University, focused on Computer Science Engineering. Mode of tutoring is classroom teaching with standard timings from 9 AM to 4 PM.
However, I am looking for some job aligned with my current academic program, as it will allow me to gain Industry exposure. Besides, I am willing to serve up to twenty hours a week during my non-college hours. Before this, I have a full-time background of one year working for a reputed firm in software engineering. Being profoundly expertise in trellis development, I am keen on working in JavaScript and Java-related technologies. Often, my co-workers portray me as being Punctual and an out-of-box thinker.
Please respond to me at your convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Srini Kolam

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11046511628 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09041571325 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5296211743 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981941658981 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039118726426 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456276695551 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740933075708 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566654399888 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.