You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear George,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to aprise you that I have missed my wallet at your home. Could you please send it back to me in the address which I mentioned back of this letter.
I would like to thank for the accommodation where you have given in your home was quite surprised. Because I did not anticipate that the whole last week you have provided hospitality, food, and beverages. Especially, we drove to the Niagra falls which was excited and felt eager to see the view. Even it was quite crowded but, it is tremendous to look at the scenery on the edge of the house. As I was rush to the airport, I had forgotten my wallet in your bedroom which is on the second floor. Besides, it has a driving license, identification number which we need to show it the toll when we cross the county. Therefore, please send it back to me at the earliest. I am looking forward to receiving from you. Sorry for the inconvenience but it is really urgent and a necessity for me otherwise I would not have bothered you.
Yours honestly,
Abc

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, honestly, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35025380711 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56302454097 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0833162593 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348785713004 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122103463898 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830954845582 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303275271027 0.12726935374 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426463677696 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.