You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my Samsung Galaxy C7 Pro while traveling from New Delhi to Bareilly in the train no 3456. This is a white-colored mobile with IMEI number 5467.

I had booked myself a seat (Ticket number 879) in the sleeper coach so that I could sleep through the long and tiresome journey and put my mobile phone on the table nearby. However, as I woke up just in the nick of time while the train was leaving Bareilly station, I forgot to pick it up before getting off the train.

Hence, I request you to send someone to the mentioned above coach and seat number to look for it as it contains some extremely valuable and sensitive data of mine. Once it is found please hold it in your office as I will get there to collect it personally.

Yours sincerely,
Sumit Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36305732484 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27178800311 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687898089172 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3454558489 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12187584009 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462102834204 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491635043984 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758610639786 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456450879629 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.