You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:explain why you are writingexpress concern about

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have already received an envelope from your 'city bank of america' just several days ago. As i had applied for a new credit card for my business purposes because my previous card has been stalled by robber and i had requested you to block that credit card.

However, when I checked the cover my e-card was missing but the documents of acknowledgment which you have sent along with the card it was available in the envelope. It seem to me that, someone has opened a cover and taken out the digital card. I am really worried about my lost card again as my bank account contains 8000$. Furthermore, wanted to inquire about certain queries regarding my credit card that, what action will you take against my lost e-card and how much time it will take to get back to me? Please let me know for my concerns as soon as possible.

Looking forward to get quick and positives response from your side.

Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Daisy

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing thi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nk of america just several days ago. As i had applied for a new credit card for m...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ous card has been stalled by robber and i had requested you to block that credit ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ested you to block that credit card. However, when I checked the cover my e-c...
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Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...rd it was available in the envelope. It seem to me that, someone has opened a cover ...
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Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8000'.
Suggestion: $8000
... card again as my bank account contains 8000$. Furthermore, wanted to inquire about ...
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Line 6, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns 8000$. Furthermore, wanted to inquire about certain queries regarding my credi...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for my concerns as soon as possible. Looking forward to get quick and positiv...
^^^
Line 8, column 20, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...soon as possible. Looking forward to get quick and positives response from your ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positives response from your side. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from your side. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Daisy
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Daisy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64804469274 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37151989522 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1978666609 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346100074455 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133181971324 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795337949201 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177246143542 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802304872333 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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