You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.> describe your course> express your feelings about the course> give suggestions regarding what the universit

Dear Sir,

I am Zara, pursuing part-time diploma in E-commerce course in the UNCC since January 2017. I am writing to express few concerns that’s bothering me in recent times. Let me explain the situation. The selected course “Diploma in E-commerce” is a comprehensive course which demands the students to do practical experiences to understand the subject better. The syllabus and the course content seems to be rewarding and we have 2 more semesters to complete the course.

However, we have couple of major concerns with regard to the course. Firstly, tutor is not multi-lingual even though he is strong technically. Since half of the students in our class speak only French, the tutor is not able to understand and respond to the queries. Also, some of the desktops provided for hands-on purpose is not in a fair condition. Eventually, we had to share the desktops and work. I would like to request that the university must focus to fortify infrastructure developments so that it will upgrade the reputation of the university.
Furthermore, tutor should be linguistically strong to mentor the students from different countries. Looking forward for a positive response.

Yours’ faithfully,
Zara

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'coupled'.
Suggestion: coupled
...mplete the course. However, we have couple of major concerns with regard to the co...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...stand and respond to the queries. Also, some of the desktops provided for hands-on purpose ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20688161636 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1877235524 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139912259511 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395042160784 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438487182187 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738813191998 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628730441129 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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