You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear Chris,
I'm sure you are enjoying the best of your life in Manchester. I am glad to share my recent experience of shifting to a new house and would love if you could join me for a week or two.
Remember, how upset I was, when I last wrote to you? My previous landlord ordered me to leave the house immediately due to some of her concerns. However, I am happy now, the house I got is more like my dream house in the suburbs of London. It's rental accommodation, I have one-bed room, a spacious lounge and a beautiful backyard where I can show off my gardening skills.
Luckily, I got the best location, there are lush green fields all around my house. For this reason, the air is quite fresh and noise-free. There are very fewer houses nearby and the neighbours are quite welcoming. Interestingly, there is a grocery store and a library at the walk of 5 minutes, and to me, these are all the basic requirements to spent peaceful days here.
I know you are too busy with your studies, but I would be pleased if you can pay a visit for few days, you will definitely love the house. I am sure together we will explore the area around. We can either go for a walk or do a party in the fields. It will be refreshing for you too.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply, and the dates of your arrival.
Best wishes buddy,
John.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Chris, Im sure you are enjoying the best of you...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Chris, Im sure you are enjoying the best of your ...
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Line 23, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f your arrival. Best wishes buddy, John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35177865613 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48005369147 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8068756315 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8125 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167956582133 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500047243536 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689654378415 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107031762011 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665527860189 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.