You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and invite them for an evening meal.
- Describe how you feel about the job
- Give directions to a meeting place
- Give suggestions on where to stay, if they come from a different city
Dear Arun,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant heath and best of sprits. I was looking for the opportunity from last six month and last week I joined Deloitte. You will feel happy to know that I joined as a manager in financial reporting department. I am feeling very enthusiastic after joining the new position since it provide me opportunity to work with multinational clients and provide me the holistic view of industries.
I am organising a small get together with our school friends to celebrate my success. I booked the table at barbeque nation, Noida sector 15. Booking is for weekend so that it will be convenient for all of us. You can either take metro from Dwarka or drive your own car. Restaurant have own underground car parking so car may be preferred option. If you find any difficulty to locate, feel free to call at restaurant reception (Contact Number - 0120-29762834).
I think, it would not be possible to return to Dwarka at night hence I have also arranged the accommodation. Hotel Plazza is near by to restaurant, since my company have corporate tie-up hotel so I can book the room any time even few hours before, so don’t worry about it. Rather, I would suggest you to visit my home and to meet my family. My family will be happy to see you. We will be honoured to have you as guest.
Yours lovingly,
Amit Bhagat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...school friends to celebrate my success. I booked the table at barbeque nation, No...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ged the accommodation. Hotel Plazza is near by to restaurant, since my company have co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64166666667 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67747732637 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1936231727 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.625 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163172055963 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519443750715 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285989578297 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102234516282 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0096982876583 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.