You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available f

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.
Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available for an interview

To,

The Manager,
Hotel Avaan.

Dear Sir,

This is regarding the job opportunity that I have seen recently in a local newspaper for a Receptionist. I am currently working as a Banquet Officer at The Taj Residency, New Delhi. I have more than 5 years of experience in the current role.
I have requested several times to my current team leader to change my profile and give me a role that is suitable to my personality. Due to some reasons, I did not get a chance to work at the front desk. I am completely aware of all the job responsibilities that are required for the role.
I have done special course in communications from a local institute and have well expertise in English. Apart from that, we were given several other training on job at The Taj.

Since, it is a peak time for marriages and I am extremely busy till next week. Would request you kindly schedule my interview in the end of current month. Hope that will work for you.

Looking forward to meet you in person.

Thanks & regard,
Rajni

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rs of experience in the current role. I have requested several times to my curr...
^
Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...t will work for you. Looking forward to meet you in person. Thanks & regard, Raj...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60655737705 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73506750953 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5970322812 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2142857143 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0714285714 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199197684369 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681331034764 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603816411343 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100606036809 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465693592935 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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