You need to take leave from your work of over one-month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss.In your letterExplain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.Explain how you will keep up to date while you are awaySuggest how yo

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you hale and healthy. I am writing to request for a month long leave for my personal commitments. As you may be aware, my parents are old and they need me to be with them for few days at my native place. Also, I have to take them to hospital on a regular basis to treat their ailment and make them recover from their illness. So, I would need a month's leave.

I will ensure to connect from home which is one of the perks of our organization and I will be available as and when needed. Besides that, I can be reached through my mobile phone such that the productivity is not hindered. Since we have daily project meeting calls, I will be joining the call on the daily basis and make myself updated.

Upon my return to work, I am planning to stay extra hours at office as well as work on weekends and make up the left over work. Meetings has been scheduled with my colleagues on a weekly schedule so that I don't miss on the project deliverable. Hope you empathize my situation and approve the sabbatical leave.

Yours sincerely,
Chitra

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a month' or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: a month; months
...er from their illness. So, I would need a months leave. I will ensure to connect fro...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lleagues on a weekly schedule so that I dont miss on the project deliverable. Hope y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, may, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42288557214 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42907358987 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4008236336 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220215971029 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767982730365 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592077946512 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120719636874 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820427559938 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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