You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing a letter to appreciate your services for a party organised at your hotel. Actually, this has arranged for celebrated 90 th birthday of my relative and about one hundred people joined this.
We had enjoyed it very much because of snacks and dinner which was available in vegetarian and non- vegetarian so delicious . Apart from that, music system of rock and pop background was also very enjoyable. The soothing and hygienic environment also plays a beneficial role for the success of party. Twenty waiters wandering around the hall and serving snacks from time to time.
All guests have attained unique experience in this function due to the services and sitting plans which was so pleasant for all. I never attend as such birthday party in my life. It should possible only beacause of your services and arrangements which is totally marvellous.
Hope for the best.
Your Faithfully,
Mandeep Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter to appreciate your...
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...d about one hundred people joined this. We had enjoyed it very much because of s...
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...etarian and non- vegetarian so delicious . Apart from that, music system of rock a...
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...l and serving snacks from time to time. All guests have attained unique experien...
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...rangements which is totally marvellous. Hope for the best. Your Faithfully,...
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...ly marvellous. Hope for the best. Your Faithfully, Mandeep Kaur.
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...Hope for the best. Your Faithfully, Mandeep Kaur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64780355836 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707792207792 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9365422369 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276332957135 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898532939882 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757615732942 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157052331707 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084598464848 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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