You play a team sport with some friends Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn t able to play with you at the weekend You decide to write to him in hospital telling him about the match Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell him

Essay topics:

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match

Hello Christian,

I hope you are well and recovering from your accident. As you know, during this weekend we had a soccer game against Texas University. It was a hard encounter due to unexpected climate conditions and you absence. The raining made wets the entire field making difficult handling the ball. Believe me! Nobody desires to play with this weather.

However, we our team won through a goal made in a fantastic movement in the last minute by Joel the Capitan. I will show you the video next week that by the way, we have recorded specially for you and you can watch every detail.

I feel a little disappointment about the match because, the principal strategies were planned with you in the team, and we miss you mate. But at the end the goal was achieved.

All the guys send you best wishes and you soon recovery. They want to see you on the field.

Have fun mate enjoy the days off recovering.

Regards.

Frank

Votes
Average: 8.3 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays off recovering. Regards. Frank
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'i feel', 'you know', 'by the way']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215053763441 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.177419354839 0.167888034529 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0591397849462 0.0606518309736 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0268817204301 0.0506257000042 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.123655913978 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0537634408602 0.041066498444 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44388317205 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0161290322581 0.0385302599488 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123655913978 0.0714148451538 173% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010752688172 0.0191574576366 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00537634408602 0.00930345855455 58% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 940.0 1141.60824742 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.134020619 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66265060241 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.259036144578 0.284621296913 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204819277108 0.211203875043 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150602409639 0.133321485273 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0963855421687 0.0843313296314 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44388317205 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622163163488 114% => OK
Word variations: 79.0950523126 62.8969750728 126% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0666666667 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6434413006 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 90.9928171075 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0666666667 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.613754768223 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 31.5485943775 37.5504026743 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.11475409836 1.13073093955 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438471329677 0.331212695627 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0552664771483 0.0927372745006 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676920905176 0.0736520305886 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556698944751 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.241695328335 0.180689518051 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133232173778 0.122183219658 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885496345703 0.0765303033291 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257642661307 0.211926503985 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121791556697 0.0737400523855 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242548617853 0.203819188451 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942598307535 0.067151250289 140% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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