You recently bought a children’s toy online and you noticed that it was not working properly. Write a letter to the manager of the toy company to complain about it. Include the following in your letter:
– What was the problem?
– What did you do about it?
– How did you feel?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that, I recently bought a children's toy (a remote car). After putting a battery inside when I turned on and, I tried to start from remote controller. Unfortunately, the car didn't started. For your ease of access my order number is AZ5784236.
Although, it was did not started in first try but, I still follow all the book guidelines, which was gave with a toy. After, this I also tried my own method. I bought a new battery from the shop and put in the car. After changing the battery, I hope it will work but, still I end with my hope.
I felt guilty because, it was my aunt son's birthday and he loves cars. I was really wanted to gave him surprise but, due to this, your worst service. I was not able to do that. I am envelope the bill with this letter. I hope you will take it on priority consideration and try to deliver a remote car as soon as possible.
Thank you for your time.
Yours faithfully,
Rajan.
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- You recently bought a children s toy online and you noticed that it was not working properly Write a letter to the manager of the toy company to complain about it Include the following in your letter What was the problem What did you do about it How did y 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that, I recen...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...mote controller. Unfortunately, the car didnt started. For your ease of access my ord...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...mber is AZ5784236. Although, it was did not started in first try but, I still f...
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Line 6, column 26, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...AZ5784236. Although, it was did not started in first try but, I still follow all th...
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Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...llow all the book guidelines, which was gave with a toy. After, this I also tried my...
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Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... guidelines, which was gave with a toy. After, this I also tried my own method. I bou...
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Line 8, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e but, due to this, your worst service. I was not able to do that. I am envelope ...
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Line 8, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rst service. I was not able to do that. I am envelope the bill with this letter. ...
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Line 8, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... am envelope the bill with this letter. I hope you will take it on priority consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29891304348 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42022408897 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2202286924 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.7333333333 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2666666667 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221644082484 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683153310024 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649513036103 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137461006622 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147532320137 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.