You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter-
1. describe the problem with the equipment
2. explain how this problem is affecting your work
3. say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to highlight the issue which I am having with my laptop since last week.
Laptop was working well but on one fine day when I plugged it in for charging, it got heated up unexpectedly and the fan started producing noise which was unbearable. Be that as it may, I tolerated this issue for a few days thinking it will automatically vanish but it has not.
Undeniably, laptop is a vital equipment without which I cannot proceed my work. Neither I am able to concentrate nor attend meetings because of the noise laptop is producing. Not only it is impacting my work, but also my mood as I get annoyed when I am not able to meet the deadlines.
It is my humble request to you to ponder the problems of my laptop and arrange for a replacement as this laptop has crossed its warranty period.
Hopefully my issue is addressed at the earliest so that I can continue to work hassle free with passion.
Thanks
Sanya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'vital equipment'.
Suggestion: vital equipment
...ut it has not. Undeniably, laptop is a vital equipment without which I cannot proceed my work....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50568181818 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61600065988 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4633655374 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172466953354 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633622932245 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530386771409 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962168978355 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394229890394 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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