You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Describe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to get your permission to attend a training program which is going to organize by OSMANIA UNIVERSITY on software testing. I have seen an advertisement about this in the newspaper.

This training program is specially meant to meet the current requirement of the industry, and they will cover all the advance methodology use in software testing. I have already informed to the Human resources department about this and they are looking for an official approval from you.
I am pretty sure after attending this training course I would be able to handle all the assigned independently, and we can make our existing software test cases more advance. Which will directly affect our software quality.
Hope you will grant the permission and inform the HR manager about your decision.
Please let me know if any extra information is need from my side.

Your sincerely,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...g. I have already informed to the Human resources department about this and they are look...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09210526316 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73351898453 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9368087079 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257840503677 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987725625902 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531245285208 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117849371188 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698135095789 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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