Your friend has applied for a new job and he needs some advice regarding the job interview Write a letter to your friend and cover the following Ask him about the nature of the job Inform him about the challenges that anyone faces at work Give him some ad

Essay topics:

Your friend has applied for a new job and he needs some advice regarding the job
interview. Write a letter to your friend and cover the following:
• Ask him about the nature of the job.
• Inform him about the challenges that anyone faces at work.
• Give him some advice regarding interview skills.

March 29, 2020

Dear Mike,

How are you and your family? It feels like forever since we last got together. Please say hi to your family for me. I’ve received your mail which you sent to ask for pieces of advice about your future job.

I’d like you to send me some information about job duties and responsibilities. Is it a fulltime or part-time vacancy? Because I heard from a close friend that this company is hiring only freelancing employees with low wages, and this is due to its financial problems. Whilst there are opponents and proponents for work in this company, I highly recommend you to proceed in your interview because there is something called talent plan for international employees to improve their skills. you will face many challenges in working in the gulf area. For example, the mentality here is to replace international talents with local citizens.

To wrap up, although the hiring process is very long and tough, I want you to stay calm and confident because they are the major determinant for selection.

I wish you all the best in your future endeavors.
Love,
Karim

Votes
Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...onal employees to improve their skills. you will face many challenges in working in...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65847612569 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677248677249 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8824844742 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209822065332 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679751510045 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761022163425 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108342824558 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757759149577 0.0580467560999 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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