Hope you and your baby are doing well! It's been a long since we met. I heard that you had a normal delivery and both are excellent. However, I am writing this letter to congratulate both of you for giving birth to the graceful and adorable baby girl.
Although, right now I am in USA but soon I would like to come and greet both of you personally, as well as I wanna spent some time with little one. I will reserve my tickets for Switzerland in couple of days, yet I might be coming on 16th or 18th of January. As well as, I already have taken leave for 20 days from my company to visit there.
Besides, What would you like for present please let me know the things of your choice. I have got few alternatives for your gifts which is famous here in America and it's not available at your location. Here, summer hats, woollen clothes plus unique cups with hand crafted design are popular among the folks whoever are visiting from around the world and once you were telling to bring it for you. So, when I will go for shopping surely I wish to purchase it for you as a offering.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Lots of love
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
... come and greet both of you personally, as well as I wanna spent some time with little one...
Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO
Message: Did you mean 'bringing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'tell' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
...und the world and once you were telling to bring it for you. So, when I will go for shop...
Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...surely I wish to purchase it for you as a offering. Looking forward to seeing...
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ward to seeing you soon. Lots of love Massie
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32420091324 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19176179596 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680365296804 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9626388114 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354302753671 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116711853794 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771462938767 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184077312696 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925194337839 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.