Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.
In your letter, you should tell:
– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased
– what you will do if it is increased.
Dear Mr. Momtazi
I am writing this letter regard to your decision concerning the rent of my house. I had shocked when I received your message. As you know, I have been living in this apartment about 5 years, in my point of view, our flat is very comfortable, convenience and has easy access to the hypermarket, cinema, city center, national park and so on. I cannot deny the fact that, one of the decisive factors that I unwilling to lost this house is commuting to my workplace is not time-consuming.
During this time that I have been living here, I have always paid rent on time, I also have tried to take care of the house properly and any of neighbors is not discontent of me. Since, I am familiar with home lease rules and regulations, you are not compelled me to pay more money for rent. Notwithstanding by the fact that I have a full time work, but I find it difficult to provide my house rent.
I would be most grateful if you would consider my economic situation and reconsideration your decision.
Thanks in advance for your cooperation in this matter.
Yours Sincerely
Mansoureh sheikh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hocked when I received your message. As you know, I have been living in this ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...twithstanding by the fact that I have a full time work, but I find it difficult to provid...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81354384658 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6743998595 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232857178259 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101289914553 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582217666882 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120416250666 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071476521849 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.