Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
• suggest someone you think should receive the award
• describe what the person does to help the community
• suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to reveal my nominated person for the reward that has been declared from your end and to propose the prize category in this connection.
I would like to introduce Mr. John, 60 years of age-old man, who has been living in our small town for 20 years. Although he is too old, age is just a number because of his mental and physical ability to solve social difficulties. He can work harder than many young men can do. Moreover, he is always enthusiastic and willing to take challenges under any circumstance.
Recently a cyclone struck in our region which expelled more than a hundred people from their house. Having extensive care to these affected people, Mr. John not only donated a significant amount of money but also founded a fundraising committee. 25 volunteers worked under this organization to rehabilitate those people.
Since his action helped to resettle many families, his contribution to society is inevitable. I think Mr. John is the right person to be honored as "the most influential person" for his incredible supportive attitude.
Please feel free to contact me if you require any assistance. I would be particularly interested to help you.
Sincerely
Mr. Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to help you. Sincerely Mr. Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89747063996 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.736585365854 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0897415897 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6153846154 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977058205477 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298023469909 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327969728078 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569865595423 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306541473835 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.