Your photograph won in a photography competition and will be presented in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
– Describe the photograph you sent to the competition
– Tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo is presented
– Invite him/her to the exhibition.
Dear Rohit,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant heath and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to you to tell not only about my success that i recently won a photography competition but also to invite you to the exhibition where i am presenting my art .
The competion was held on february 20th in Brampton, it was a charity event for children welfare thus all the collected money from this event goes to an NGO. Moreover, there were fifty photographer who participated in this event although my pictures got the maximum votes.Besides this , the them of the competition was "nature" .Accordingly,I presented all the photos regarding forest ,wildlife animals and mountains. Majority of the pictures were of my favorite animal" lion" which were appreciated by all. although , I showed photo's of waterfall and sunrise were brilliant too.
Therefore , they send me the invitation for an exhibition which is going to take place at Toronto city center on April 20th where they are displaying my collection of pictures to common masses. Since this is an extremely prestigious event of my life besides this we have also not seen each other since long, i indeed want you to come as soon as possible
Looking forward to meeting you.
Best wishes
Balkiran Kaur
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... forward to meeting you. Best wishes Balkiran Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02325581395 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96817702513 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2948352919 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168806017537 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659897865267 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843937850438 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108091249322 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093075723237 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.