Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for help. In your letter:
1. explain why your son needs help
2. ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods
3. and suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.
Dear Sir,
I am Lima parent of Asha who is studying grade 5 in your school at king street road, Pune. I am writing this letter to request you to take some additional classes for my daughter in the Hindi language as she is getting fewer marks from the last 2 term monthly exams.
As you were aware we are from the south part of India and our mother tongue is Telugu. At home, we speak either Telugu or English so he is not much aware of the Hindi language. Due to this, we need your help in teaching writing essays in Hindi. Please let us know about your Hindi teaching experience and I would like to the way you follow while teaching. While I can cross-check with my daughter your mode of teaching will match with her expectation or not?
We prefer the classes two days in the weekend morning session around 9 am till 12 pm. As weekdays busy with school work and homework so prefer weekends.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Lima parent of Asha who is studying...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur kind cooperation. Yours sincerely, Lima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47120418848 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28493096494 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4450690157 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238359537203 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897487307847 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665880032554 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120767204974 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640535805274 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.