Discuss the relevance of study history Do you think preserving historical monuments is a waste of effort and money

Commonly considered as one of the basic subjects in every curriculum, history is not only a dry record of past events but it is indeed a vital source of inspiration for the future. Although the importance of history cannot be put into discussion. there are still many who question the necessity of spending money to preserve historical monuments. The aim of this essay is to demonstrate how essential history could be and moreover to explain how much a society can benefit from preserving monuments.

Since the dawn of mankind, humans have tried to leave footprints of their passage on the Earth. In spite of the lack of artistic knowledge and sophisticated tools, our ancestors have been able to depict hunting scenes and animals. Cave paintings are an outstanding example of this art. They tell us stories of individuals dead thousands years ago, whose deeds however continue to echo in our time. Furthermore, those pictures are extremely precious, in the light of the fact that they are testimony to an era otherwise utterly hidden in the fog. Over the centuries, humans have honed their skills becoming able to carve the marble, erect massive churches, and built temples. All of these artifacts represent a once in a life opportunity that people have to dig into the past to learn from it. Additionally, monuments are a source of income as well.

Bolstered by an evident economic payoff, monument preservation has become a priority for several cities scattered around the world. Locations rich in historic buildings base in some cases their economy on income generated by tourists magnetized by the power of ancient treasures. Beside the artistic value of some works, the financial impact that monuments have on the local economy cannot be underestimated. Where many see only waste of resources, other see in preserving monuments a way to boost the economy. Monuments do actually bring in additional wealth in a community, by creating job opportunities in many fields, from housing to restaurants to maintenance.

Accordingly tho the facts mentioned above, it is therefore evident that spending money on preserving historical monuments is worth the effort. Not only monuments are a vivid testimony of a past we can learn from, they are also a reliable resource cities can rely on to improve the local economy.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in some cases, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10236220472 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86134504835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2640067807 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.315789474 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18883341332 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517544674418 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600213545354 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11579864033 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602529707916 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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