Every year several languages die out Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Language is a part of nation’s culture and by disappearing every language, it can be considered that the culture of special nation is vanishing.
There are variant languages that are spoken all over the world and people of every tribe, society and country learn their mother tongue in order to communicate with each other. Also, for convenience of people in a country one common language is educated in schools to avoid difficulties of learning different languages. Unfortunately, one of the significant reasons causing to forget mother tongue and to persuade parents avoiding to educate their local language to their children is that they don’t want to their kids get into trouble in the first day of their school.
It’s a wrong policy encouraging children to avoid learning their mother tongues, as it’s a symbol of their local culture and for conveying our ancestor’s main language and making it to remain alive, mother languages should be educated beside the other educational materials.
However, there are people that believe in lessening variation of languages because foe example if they want to travel to a specific area that have a native tongue, they have to learn some words in order to communicate with the local people. But, this opinion is not acceptable because it causes to some rare languages that are the symbol of a culture of a nation die out.
All in all, diminishing variant kinds of languages are dramatically soaring, and as far as I’m concerned it is only a tip of an iceberg because we should help to make our customs and cultures convey throughout the generations, and language is a main part of every society’s culture. Therefore, people should consider that there is more to convenience than deleting languages, and if there is a language that only one person can speak he/she has the responsibility of learning it ti new generations because by dying every language a rich culture of every region changes, and it makes the death of cultures and customs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forgetting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: forgetting
... one of the significant reasons causing to forget mother tongue and to persuade parents a...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding educating'.
Suggestion: avoiding educating
...t mother tongue and to persuade parents avoiding to educate their local language to their children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03603603604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78884088634 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8460387982 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.333333333 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235713779447 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117660828481 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592686702113 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136475086901 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053396747751 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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