Learning is now based more and gadget than books in some schools. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
Today, modern technology makes us thingking about useful, simple, and complete things that can help them to get new knowledges. For this reason, some of teachers using gadgets and reading books for learning something that they want to learn. Using book or gadget have adventages and disadvantages point it can be seen from some topic.
Using books can improve our knowledge in everywhere like in remote area or the deep of the forest or in the offshore. It can be read everytime that we want, and when we read a book in public place it is stil comfertable to use. Despite of some books usually thick and weight so we only can bring limit book to some place and also it make us to get limit information too.
Using gadgets is easier to bring everywhere because they are simple, handy, and easy to use for some people who understand to use it, but electronic tools still need battery so it can not be used for along time, despite of we can recharge it for a moment. By using a gadget can make easier when we need important data, but we must connect with data connection, the problems are the signal in some place is not stable sometimes we fail to get connection so it can make me fail to to get important data.
to get new knowledges
to get new knowledge //knowledge is an uncountable noun
some of teachers using gadgets and reading books for learning something
some of teachers are using gadgets and reading books for learning something
Using book or gadget have adventages and disadvantages
Using book or gadget has advantages and disadvantages //subject is : Using book or gadget
from some topic.
from some topics.
Despite of some books usually thick and weight
Despite the fact that some books are usually thick and heavy
it make us to get limit information too.
it makes us to get limited information too.
can not be used for along time
can not be used for a long time
despite of we can recharge it for a moment.
Description: Check books how to use 'in spite of', 'Despite '
the problems are the signal in some place is not stable sometimes
the problems are that the signal in some places is not stable sometimes
Sentence: Today, modern technology makes us thingking about useful, simple, and complete things that can help them to get new knowledges.
Error: thingking Suggestion: thinking
Sentence: Using book or gadget have adventages and disadvantages point it can be seen from some topic.
Error: adventages Suggestion: advantages
Sentence: It can be read everytime that we want, and when we read a book in public place it is stil comfertable to use.
Error: comfertable Suggestion: comfortable
Error: stil Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: everytime Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Words: 223 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 223 350
No. of Characters: 966 1500
No. of Different Words: 119 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.332 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.331 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.784 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.458 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.648 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.216 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5