Many high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women To what extent do you

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Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

To what extent do you agree?

For so many years were men dominated the company workforce specially in a corporate world, they have taken the high-level positions. Wherein advance countries, half of the company's population are women some people think to place women in higher management roles as well. In my opinion, I agree to allocate women in managerial positions.

Unlike before were most women worked as an office administrator filing and sorting documents, then later after getting married or having a child they prefer to stay at home taking care of the family. Nowadays, more women are career oriented and the societ...

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as the job requirements qualifies the credentials
as the job requirements qualify the credentials

if she's a woman that will lead the company.
if she's a woman who will lead the company.

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paragraph 2: reason 1 + why reason 1 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.

paragraph 3: reason 2 + why reason 2 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 246 350
No. of Characters: 1197 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.96 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.866 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.684 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.061 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5