Music is played in every society and culture in the world today Some people think that music only brings benefits to individuals and societies Other however think that music can have negative influence on both Discuss these views and give your own opinion

Music is highly appreciated by society and plays a key role in people’s lives. A growing number of people argue that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies, while others think it also has harmful effects. I will discuss both views before getting a concrete decision.
On the one hand, there is a common belief that music is a beneficial activity because it is the best way of relieving stress. People tend to listen to the melody whenever they feel tired and stressful so that they can feel relax. Take classical music as an example, there are numerous musicians such as Beethoven and Mozart whose songs are considered as a food for souls. In addition, ringtones also play a cultural role. Showing the tradition and history of the country requires fascinating and well-composed kinds of music. For instance, Azerbaijan is famous for its Mugham which shows how great the sense of music Azerbaijanian citizens have. As a result, all genres of music must be maintained by society in order to introduce the nation’s customs.
On the other hand, despite some exceptions, popular music is mostly influenced by rappers and pop musicians who are considered indecent. Therefore, new melodies can impress posterity poorly because teens choose rappers and other singers as a role model. For example, in Germany, a high percentage of teenagers are drug addicts meanwhile underground rap is the most popular genre of German music. However, no single solution is enough to decrease the number of people who like to listen to this type of music.
In conclusion, even though some people hold an opinion that music brings a negative influence on society, I think oppositely. Despite a variety of problems with popular music, individuals need to listen to different songs to develop and saving cultural values.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (30 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...nd Mozart whose songs are considered as a food for souls. In addition, ringtones also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71379077133 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.175859577 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391924459097 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115360605561 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073029758921 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246314047285 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851299547185 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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