Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online

In recent years, the development of the Internet has created a new form of business that is online business. The online business impact on both buyers and companies directly. Because it make some benefits and drawbacks for people who buy products and companies which sell products.
Online shopping brings many good things for shoppers. Firstly, buying products online is more convenient than buying in the traditional way. People are always busy in modern society because they must pay attention to their work. Therefore, people cannot spend time going to supermarket and selecting each product. However, when online shopping, people can select products on their cellphone and people will get their products by deliverer. Therefore, people can totally save much time to focus on working.
Moreover, customers can also save much money. People often want to buy something that has a cheap price in order to economize on money. Beside, products in the traditional shops are often more expensive than products in the online shops, because traditional shops must pay rent cost for shop staffs and business premises. Therefore, when buying online, people can buy product with the cheaper price.
However, shopping online still has some of drawbacks. It is difficult for customers to check the quality of product. Because when buying online, people can only evaluate products via their pictures. Therefore, sometimes people can get a product that is not similar to which they intend buying.
In the aspect of companies, shopping online has created many advantages for that companies. First of all, companies which buy something online will get profits. People like to use the Internet in their life so they establish a huge market. Therefore, If companies sell products online, they will have more opportunities to sell more products. For example, many e-commerce website have made a lot of profits such Amazon, Ebay, Alibaba and ect, which sell so many products for people around the world and get huge profits. Moreover, shopping online also stimulate the creation of many new fields. The economy is always mutual interaction, so the appearance of e-commerce has brought about a sequence of new changes. For example, companies apply advanced technologies into managing products instead of managing in the traditional methods.
On the other hand, one the main drawback of the e-commerce is deceit. This matters is not often appear in prestigious e-commerce website, but people still are deceived by no credibility seller. For instant, the product is exchanged it’s color and shape, or it is low quality.
In conclusion, the both customers and companies has taken so many advantages from shopping online. Buyers and e-commerce website are contributing to change the retail market in the world.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an buy product with the cheaper price. However, shopping online still has some ...
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...t similar to which they intend buying. In the aspect of companies, shopping onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3018018018 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63105482203 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466216216216 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5598901561 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36666666667 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269365996437 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833900359283 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569873245376 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149524242822 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554654905796 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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