Some people view conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Adolescence is the toughest part of life that a human being can pass throw. It is a period that decides on what direction life will go on the future. There exist many conflicts between family and teenagers that can affect positively or negatively their future development. Furthermore parent’s behavior has its importance on creating a teenagers personality.
On the first point of view, conflicts are a necessary part of being a mature person. They help on creating a strong personality and being an independent civil. In my opinion adolescents need to pass throw conflicts so they will be learned with life tricks. Hence, parents should take their adolescence and their experience during that time as an example and try to understand their children behavior in order to be able to help them. Many people think that conflicts are unavoidable part of youth. For instance, in western countries people’s view of conflicts between teenagers and parents are a usual facts of life that everybody go through.
On the other hand, conflicts may cause disrespect on teenager and parent relationship, which may be a disadvantage on the growing up process. In my opinion family support is the key to succeed in any aspect of life, especially in this problematic period of living. Therefore there should be cooperation between parents and their children in order to avoid the bad behavior that could lead them to different ways of law breaches. Based on my experience, conversations with my mother helped me to solve any of friendship or school problems that I used to have. We also used to talk about moments that we had conflicts which was very useful on avoiding them in the near future.
From many peoples perspective, mine as well, adolescence is that part of life when both youth and parents get psychologically overloaded. This is a phase when dispute has its advantages except of disadvantages too. In my conclusion these conflicts may be a strong weapon of creating a suitable character but there should also be time to justify these conflicts by making serious conversations with parents so teenagers could be aware that they will always have family support.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277202072539 0.247107548796 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.158031088083 0.15552993741 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0647668393782 0.0946569551029 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.059585492228 0.0437536398559 136% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142487046632 0.122223957237 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0336787564767 0.0403219363162 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89652343324 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284974093264 0.0326786765898 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00259067357513 0.00163938923432 158% => OK
Determiners: 0.0751295336788 0.0861751148067 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0336787564767 0.0214082191602 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233160621762 0.0119246538136 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2173.0 1933.38276553 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 316.052104208 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03611111111 6.10592293882 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20519365927 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353760445682 0.37474360046 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272980501393 0.284197041944 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197771587744 0.203843217982 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153203342618 0.137313986986 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89652343324 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529247910864 0.560935902166 94% => OK
Word variations: 57.2895201021 60.7401812628 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0911823647 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9444444444 20.7725350517 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3232748154 49.5273876611 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75066313 93.4120437189 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1405835544 15.2821509519 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.620689655172 0.594174754866 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01102204409 120% => OK
Readability: 47.2424945837 49.1922392462 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.84210526316 1.69127372897 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.215732414114 0.332604825255 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0846782864444 0.102734651613 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596445066433 0.0668474354756 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463953907419 0.534917948617 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0879183971746 0.148666948902 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788474353395 0.13441755203 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547597218105 0.0742828286743 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320971651109 0.324241079732 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0628021686672 0.0640056729886 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146122092047 0.22793763319 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592919281031 0.0582452615562 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Too many negative sentences.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.60220440882 231% => Too many negative topic words.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Rates: 80.2105263158 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9