In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, many families choose for both parents to go out to work in this competitive world. Some people say this statement brings benefits to family, while others say it brings negative effects. However, it is important to look at both sides of the arguments.
First of all, both parents go out for work can get the additional income. Surveys found that getting more income will give a better financial outcome. As an instance, the husband gets a salary from his office. However, if the wife also works at the same office, she will also get a salary. It means their money is doubled. Another point is that both husband and wife can implement their skills in the working field. It has been proven by some experts that people today mostly finished the undergraduate program in the university. As a result, most people must be able to show their skills in a company or other businesses.
It might be true that both parents go to work brings out advantages to a family. Nevertheless, disadvantages also found from this statement. Firstly, children will feel lonely and lack of support due to their parents’ absence at home. Recent studies show that today’s working hours mostly end at around 5 or 6 pm. This makes parents go home late and feel more tired. Therefore, parents do not have time to communicate with their children. Secondly, children will feel that they lack parental affection. This can cause a serious problem, for example children can do criminal things. Based on research, most criminals are caused by a lack of parental affection.
After analyzing both sides of the arguments, although both parents go to work will make a better financial for family, it can make a bad attitude to childrens. In my opinion, it is better for wifes to take care of the children or rent a nanny to maintain children's attitude and behaviour.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83911671924 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.599242746 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4192595038 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4090909091 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417566290496 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114511630848 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957059213128 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248634285848 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785860296034 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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