Essay topics:
Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children.
Nowadays, TV is one of the most popular entertainments in most families. And some people think that TV effects on us, especially children. I think that TV has both good and bad sides for children and it has good more than bad. In this essay, I will look at both positive and negative sides that TV effects on children’s life.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of watching TV. One of the main positives is that TV offers a wide range of entertainment for children in their free time. Children sometimes get studying pressure in school and pressure from their parents. They can watch fun ...
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TV effects on us
TV affects on us
Sentence: I think that TV has both good and bad sides for children and it has good more than bad.
Description: The fragment has good more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace good with adverb
they can not only improve their English skills but also can learn
they can not only improve their English skills but also learn
watching TV have some disadvantages
watching TV has some disadvantages
Sentence: It is obviously that TV is an important part in children's life.
Description: The fragment is obviously that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace obviously with adjective
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.423 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.059 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1861 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.641 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.46 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.423 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.059 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.423 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5