advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. is it a positive or negative development?
These days, the popularity of advertisements is dramatically increasing in people's lives. I would argue that there are both positives and negatives in equal measure.
On the one hand, it should never be denied that advertisements have some noteworthy positive effects. Firstly, customers can be informed of newly-launched products. This means that thanks to the rise of advertisements, consumers are aware of a wide range of selections and not be confined by a narrow range of products. Second, With the ceaseless growth of advertising, people could have more far-reaching employment opportunities. In fact, companies created advertisements need to hire various kinds of job ranging from designer, content-writing to photography. Finally, advertising serves as a bridge between manufacturers and consumers, expanding business opportunities and raising living standards.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned merits, some drawbacks do exist. To begin with, advertising can be deceiving. Since marketers can employ tricks and gimmicks to incite people to buy products that can be poor of quality, leading to great dissatisfaction among buyers. Another noticeable disadvantage is it would drive up the price of products. The primary reason for it is that the selling price of marketed products needs to cover the advertising expenses. Furthermore, Advertisings tend to tempt people to purchase unnecessary things. People might find it hard to resist the temptation of products that are advertised beyond their expectations.
In conclusion, the development of businesses has given rise to the growing number of advertisements, and this trend is, in my opinion, advantageous as well as detrimental.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69803921569 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46674208063 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6646161307 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144718626578 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431696002724 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364577911406 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082485733303 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354606790536 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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