For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and Math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to the list. To what extent do you agree?
Since older times. education has focused upon developing and enhancing students' reading, writing and math skills. However, as modern life is dominated by computers, some people are of the opinion that computer skills should be added to the skill set. I strongly agree with the point of view.
Computers have made our lives easier and efficient. Moreover, computer as a subject has been introduced in most of the schools and children are encouraged to use it's applications and websites to support learning. For instance, 1x1 is an application developed for schools that enables children to create an account and practice grade appropriate Maths and English exercises. Teachers also use the interface to track the progress of each child based on exercises completed by them. Therefore, to be able to use websites and applications to support learning, children have to know how to use a computer.
The increased range of computers can also be seen at workplace. Nowadays, everyone is supposed to send e-mails for official communication. Internet has taken over lives and made the world a much smaller place. With multi national companies having offices in different global locations, e-mails are the most efficient and economic means of communication. Furthermore, when recruiting new employees, companies seek individuals with a prior knowledge of computer applications like MS Office, emails, etc. Thus, if seen from this light if students learn computer skill at school level, their chances of gaining employment are increased.
After having discussed the most relevant advantages of computers in our modern life, it can be clearly seen that the addition of computer skill to my education will be beneficial to the children in the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34657039711 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87221723083 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5652038832 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281632085427 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812218283738 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650801130738 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179160648292 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595304602757 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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