Children should not eat fast food?
Today's fast food is no longer strange to each of us. It is very convenient and helps us save a lot of time. It is always a favorite food for young children. But parents need to know that this is a bad habit because fast food has a lot of negative effects on their health and development.
Firstly, most fast food contains high levels of fat and starch and is, therefore, a risk of being overweight and obese. This will lead to a number of other dangerous diseases such as fatty blood, cardiovascular disease, arterial atherosclerosis, cancer...
Secondly, eating fast food will greatly affect a child's digestive system. Fast food contains very little vegetables so that it is scarce of fiber, vitamins and essential minerals for children’s digestion. Moreover, meat accounting a large portion of fast food is often fried at high temperatures, which causes nutrients to decompose quickly, becoming indigestible and energetic.
Finally, traditional meals are still the best for every family in term of health, savings, and feeling. Meals seem to be fresher, safer and more economical when we know exactly about the food supplying source and select the ingredients by ourselves. Furthermore, mothers can control the necessary nutrients providing to the children through the frequent menus so that they can add more or less to balance meals within a week, even a month. The children may learn cooking skills as well as have a sense of the love given to them, which contributes to their growth both mentally and physically.
In conclusion, mothers in every family should take the time to cook balanced meals that are delicious, nutritious and cheap for loved ones in their families instead of buying them fast food because traditional meals are good for not only their health but also their growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03678929766 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79691460173 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628762541806 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.228586934 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354509246275 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112572068943 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868213498179 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177590513669 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994606302077 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.