Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements?
Nowadays, consumer are exposed to too many advertisements such as tv ads, radio spot and flyers because of the rash competition between different brands. In my opinion, advertisements affects people deeply; moreover, it usually compel people to what to they choose or buy.
On the one hand, repeated ads digs their slogan into people minds, as like learning something by heart. In other words, the primer goal of advert is to influence people in a someway that leads to change in people consuming habits and behaviours. For example, according to the results of a study in Harvard University, participants could describe an item easily, which is set up in a TV film intentionally, even they have never known this item before. Hence, people learn slogan of advertisement subconsciously; as a result of that, they are profoundly affected by it.
Furthermore, some brands are illustrated to public as warmly and friendly company by advertisements, while rivals are humiliated or undermined. To put simply, another goal of ads is to reach consumer by dominating their mind with acquainted objects that are showed up in ads previously. To illustrate, a survey declared by Amazon company, consumer tends to buy the familiar product from TV when they encounter unfamiliar two product that one of them was advertised in TV ads before. Thus, advertisement makes product familiar with consumer to canalize and influence them to buy it.
In conclusion, growing market sector leads to proliferating number of advertisement in the market. I strongly believe that people are hypnotized and influenced painfully by these ads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27413127413 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.098233673 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4511659621 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220625681986 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802349998112 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064881519267 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130957009776 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046319333352 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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