Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Enthusiasm for globalization is at an all-time high, especially in the economy part as people can buy the goods from other countries much more easily. Some commentators worry that countries are going to be too similar during the trend, while I think they are overthinking and it is actually a good thing.
To begin with, the view that products globalization brings negative affects can hold water to some degree. This is because some huge companies from foreign countries may monopoly the market and damage local economic development when they enter a new market. Coca Cola, for instance, has a significant place after it knocked China’s market, and beat down many Chinese domestic beverage companies during its expansion. Since most of the foreign brands cannot create as many jobs and tax income as local industries, it is therefore clear that buying more products coming from oversea has bad impact on a country’s economy.
On the other hand, this trend actually brings more benefits if people can access the same products anywhere in the world. Firs of all, it does not mean that the world would be a big country if the products can be transported to everywhere. The reason why countries are so different can unique is not the goods they are selling, but the various cultural and historical heritage in the world. It is ridiculous to say that the diversity is gone if the same goods are everywhere. In addition, it is also a very good chance for local companies and business to develop by exporting. Seen in this light, it is undeniable that the advantages is obvious.
In conclusion, although the disadvantages are sometimes inevitable, globalization of products benefits countries more. Companies and business should prepare for the challenges from foreigner while seize the opportunities to thrive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15436241611 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86783989318 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7125954909 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274828855344 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874857728187 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719417171077 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155147726043 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428433882392 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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