Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this and how it can be address?
Health is one of the most crucial aspects in someone’s success, which determines one’s growth and prosperity. Furthermore, sedentary lifestyle has become a common sight with the advancement of technology, which has resulted many detrimental impacts on human’s life, and thereby brings many health repercussions, which can be resolved by physical exercise. However, in many countries doctors hold the opinion that people are not getting enough physical exercises. Therefore, I will highlight causes and solution of this problem.
To begin with, life can be a miserable without healthy lifestyle, but there are certain hindrances, which are responsible for not making people to do any physical exercise. Firstly, this competitive world has made people very focused towards their work to accomplish ladder of success, consequently this work dedication and commitment has reduced their time for recreational activities, especially for physical exercises. Secondly, availability of everything due to advent of technology has made people effortless and cynical, thus people do not want to engross themselves in physical exercises. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that many youngsters are under the threat of heart attack and obesity owing to lack of participation in physical exercise.
However, every problem comes with solution, which is similar in this case. This grim problem can be resolved with various initiatives. Firstly, long working hours in companies must mitigate to ensure some spare time for the employees so that they could indulge themselves in physical exercises. In addition, government should aware people about importance of health and drastic impact of over usage of technology, and further establish sports ground and many other physical exercise related activities. Finally, the government should enforce stringent employment laws that help people to deduct their overtime work and make their work life balance.
In conclusion, healthy person can merely contribute in nation’s growth therefore it is the responsibility of an individual to give some time to physical exercise, irrespective of thinking about money and so on.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6925566343 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95635274874 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7167439425 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261780391475 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913005769206 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06945205503 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147066914696 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636683089258 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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