Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

Eating sugar in excessive amount is very detrimental effect on human's health. In this regard, some of people believe that the governments have an importance role in the care of the people and should control their consumption of sugar. In the opposite, others opine that it is the duty of individuals. While, in my opinion everyone should take care of their own health and the intake of sugar and their body’s requirements.

On the on hand, it is the moral duty of the government to keep the nation healthy and fit. There are many ways through which the governments can control feeding people in terms of consumption of sugar as much as possible. In the first stage, the government can reduce the annual production of sugar and they can stimulate people to eat alternative products like berries and raisins. Furthermore, if the government levies a high tax rate on these products, their selling prices will be increased and people will be discouraged to buy them.

On the other hand, the supporter of second point say no one can take care of a person’s health better than themselves and put forward some compelling reasons to justify their point of view. For instance, if someone has a family history of diabetes not only sugar is harmful for their body but also it can also be fatal. So, they should take precautions and consume less sugar than the others because they are more likely to develop this disease.

On the whole, in my point of view, if people can control themselves of the consumption of sugar, they will have a healthier body, although, same measures can be taken to intake of sugar by governments.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ve amount is very detrimental effect on humans health. In this regard, some of people ...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ffect on humans health. In this regard, some of people believe that the governments have an im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81494661922 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66284453146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6427525315 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334554183147 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1245897461 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624395181841 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209233727908 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466314305445 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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