Every day, millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world.why do you think this is happening?how can we solve the problem?

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Every day, millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world.why do you think this is happening?how can we solve the problem?

It is a fact that daily huge amount of food is wasted in the globe. If asked, I would say that there are many reasons for this situation and also has optimistic remedies to overcome these issues. Both aspects are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.

Discussing the reasons for wasting food, the foremost one is, availability of different types of cuisines. Because of this people always attract towards to try new dishes and they do not eat home cooked food. This is mostly happening with young people. The other one cause is that expiry date of dairy products. Most of dairy items such as bread, eggs, cakes are not used after two or three days. Furthermore, due to the environmental issues, enormous tonnes of rice, wheat and other crops are wasted. This is happening because of improper storage facilities from the government.

As the mentioned problem has few remedies too. The first one I would like to put forward is, government should spread vigilance between people about impotence of food items. If ministry conduct seminars about nutrition value of staple along with difficult methods to produce the food. Besides this, in schools teachers should teach their students about value of food, so it creates a smart community in the world and they discourage to waste more food. Apart from that most paramount solution is that people should change their dietary habits. They should consume homemade food rather than fast food.the reason is that home-cooked foods are not only lavish in vitamins, nutrition but also have long expiry time.

To conclude, it can be inferred that although there are many reasons for throwing food, by applying optimistic solutions people can outcome from this problem easily.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, apart from, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42779072901 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7553069296 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181475679998 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553279607198 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468975945002 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11128447438 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246800463651 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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