Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, language barrier is one of the leading issue, required immediate attention. From past few decades, every year several languages are dying. Although many have opinion that if there are fewer languages in the world, our life will become easier. Still numerous people think that every language has its own importance and should be part of the culture of particular region. In this essay we will discuss about the reasons to lead this issue and what we should do to ameliorate the situation.

In one hand, myriad of people strongly believes that one of the main reason of differences between countries are language barrier. Currently youngsters and juveniles from different countries are facing many problems because of not having good command on other languages. Furthermore, when it comes to the studies, students who wants to acquire higher education in abroad, have to be fluent in the mother tongue of the same country. For instance, students who wants to study in Germany, have to qualify language test of German.

On the other hand, nevertheless, it is reasonable to say that every language should be important for the country/ region. It is responsibility of each individual and society to protect their language, just the way they protect or respect their region and culture.

In the conclusion of above discussion , would like to say that i firmly believe that every language is important and should be respected by everyone. At the same time, in order to bring equality in modern life, it is very important to choose one common language by all the countries.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69098973352 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5675015046 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330076037291 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112897042896 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744039364161 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184456831665 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122230858373 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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