In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?
It is commonly know fact that people tend to not be so close with their neighbours as they were before. In this essay I will explain reasons of that and ways to improve relations as well as contact between neighbours.
First of all, nowadays life is different than before, because people have much more ways of spending their leisure time. For instance within almost every major municipality there are many enjoyable facilities like i.e. shopping centers, swimming pools, bowling clubs as well as cinemas. Secondly there is also quite modern invention, which is the internet. People can communicate with old friends, family every time they want and that is possible reason why they do not feel any need to have close relations with their neighbours.
According to improving contact between neighbours, there are many ways to do so. For example it is still quite popular, especially within inhabitants of suburbs to organise parties on their neighbourhoods. Furthermore, in cities especially, there are many playgrounds for children. Investing in such facilities may encourage children to go out more often. As children are not fully independent, many parents have to keep them and that is why I believe that playgrounds are perfect places for making friends, not only for children, but even parents, who may find keeping their descendants more interesting while socialising.
To conclude, there are many reasons why it is so often to people to not have any bond with their neighbours; however, in my opinion main cause is that cities have more to offer than in past and people are unable to manage time for either neighbours and local facilities. Although, it can be changed with simple initiatives like organising neighbours parties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14840989399 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75239387894 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1445431741 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345369761184 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115473099721 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105460903594 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22879267059 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904721809038 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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