A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and they should have same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
There has been an increasing number of individuals who believe that creatures should not be harmed by people because they too have equal rights as humans. However, others reckon that animals may have been used for highly nutritious food for human being and also for the scientific experiments in laboratories, which will further assist scientists in several research programs. This essay opines that animals should have their own law so that they cannot get exploited. This essay will further discuss both the arguments in the subsequent paragraphs.
One of the most important benefits from the animals is that the flesh of them has a rich source of proteins and vitamins. As we all know about the fact that the brain requires nutrients to work properly and these nutrients are only found in animals, especially Omega 3 and B12. To exemplify, the reports of research done by the scientist of NCBI, The United States of America highlighted that vegans are deficient of Omega 3 fatty acids and B12 because of which they have the tendency to get the brain disorder. It is a disease in which a person has a low neurological and cognitive performance. Therefore, Individuals may have lifelong devastating effects on the individual, family and society.
In contrast, species are disappearing so quickly that scientists are anticipating that the earth is going towards the mass extinction. Fauna is in danger because of conducting the different experiments upon them by humans. To illustrate, since independence the horn of white Rhino had been used to manufacture medicine to cure the hypotension, as a result, the creature became endangered in 1970. At last, In 1990 it had been declared extinct by The State Forestry and Grassland Administration of China government. Therefore, the protection of animal life is significant towards the survival of both species, and this can be achieved by observing animal rights just like humans.
In conclusion, although omnivorous have been getting appropriate nutrients by consuming flesh and meat, creatures are vanishing at the rapid rate which should be protected to maintain the ecological balance of the earth.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21902017291 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90889323329 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4656538868 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.733333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248558927655 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668802957592 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754745363684 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136266957043 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120441417728 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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